Effective copy
Effective structure for all kinds of copyHere our expert, Tim Bax a leading copy writer, gives some tips on how to structure copy more effectively.
Always open with a fact. It helps to set the scene by telling your audience what you are going to talk about. Your fact should be non-contentious, so nobody can disagree with it, but never bland. “Lens cleaners are a useful added-value to offer customers", especially in the pharmaceutical sector,” for instance, would be better than “Everyone needs lots of lens cleaner.” Don’t start selling or making product claims right away – that comes across as pushy and off-putting.
Follow up your fact with a problem that prospects face – what some copywriters call “the pain.” “If you don’t deal with a trustworthy supplier, you risk paying over the odds and receiving lens cleaners."
Now they are ready for the offer that solves the problem you just outlined. “Our fairly-priced, guaranteed-quality supply service takes all the trouble (and much of the cost) out of finding the lens cleaners you need.”
Before moving to a close there’s one more thing. The offer may have appealed to the audience’s heads, but now we must appeal to their hearts, through the inspiring principle… “And once essential lens cleaner supplies are taken care of for less, you can concentrate on running your business more successfully.”
Finally comes the call to action. Use words that create a sense of urgency – “Order low-cost, high-quality lens cleaners today”
These elements can be as long or short as you like, from a line or two as in online ads and emails, to longer paragraphs in press advertising. But unless all are present in some form your message will lack the structure that makes it most effective.
Follow up your fact with a problem that prospects face – what some copywriters call “the pain.” “If you don’t deal with a trustworthy supplier, you risk paying over the odds and receiving lens cleaners."
Now they are ready for the offer that solves the problem you just outlined. “Our fairly-priced, guaranteed-quality supply service takes all the trouble (and much of the cost) out of finding the lens cleaners you need.”
Before moving to a close there’s one more thing. The offer may have appealed to the audience’s heads, but now we must appeal to their hearts, through the inspiring principle… “And once essential lens cleaner supplies are taken care of for less, you can concentrate on running your business more successfully.”
Finally comes the call to action. Use words that create a sense of urgency – “Order low-cost, high-quality lens cleaners today”
These elements can be as long or short as you like, from a line or two as in online ads and emails, to longer paragraphs in press advertising. But unless all are present in some form your message will lack the structure that makes it most effective.
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